martes, 12 de octubre de 2010

Descriptive Essay !!!!!

"MY FAVORITE DATE"


OUTLINE
1. Introduction
    1.1 Special moments are unforgettable
    1.2 Everybody has important moments  in his/her  life
    1.3 All details are relevant 

2. The unexpected call
    2.1 The moment 
    2.2 Feelings 
    2.3 Place
    2.4 Things around me

3. Arriving to my date 
    3.1 Place (how it seemed) 
    3.2 Feelings 
    3.3 People
    3.4 Important things

4. The  date
     4.1 My  date ( how it seemed, smelt etc.)
     4.2 Food/ drinks 
     4.3 Feelings
     4.4 Enviroment
     4.5 Conversation
     4.6 Fantastic ending

5. Conclusion


 My favorite date


Each person has something special or important  to remember. When we have something  relevant that happened in our lives we remember everything without missing any detail. We can remember how something smells, tastes, how you felt at the moment of doing or watching something. We can explain the the simplest thing with a lot of details and transmit to others the  feelings and thoughts that we had at that time. It is because special moments are  unforgettable and each event  is  in our mind.

April, 1 st of 2007 was a beautiful sunny day. I woke up with the soft and relaxing singing of the birds, when I opened my window I could smell the fresh and calming  nature air. I was very nervous and tense because  that day  was time to do one difficult and complicated exam.  When I arrived  at school, my classroom  seemed quiet and  boring, all people were afraid , angry and anxious but after the exam everything was calm and peaceful. I was talking with my friends when I listened the blaring  ringtone of my cellphone, I felt  my legs shivering and my hands sweating. I answered the call and listened his adorable lovely voice telling me:  "would you like to have a date with me?". In that moment, everything stopped around me, I did not  hear  anything, in my mind only was that  incredible proposal. After a pair of minutes I came back to the  real world  answering: "yes, it sounds great!, it is a good idea!". 

I arrived to the place of my date, it was an elegant and perfect restaurant. It was very big with a modern decor; to go into the restaurant I had to cross the big crystal electric doors. Behind those doors, there were two gentle tall young waiters that helped me to find my dating table. When I was walking to that place I heard the romantic  loud violin music that made me feel relaxed. Also, I saw the different couples; some of them were talking, others eating or kissing, that made feel strange and uncomfortable because I could sense the beautiful love that was in that place. In addition, I could smell the delicious food that was in the different tables, the only thing that I wanted was to arrive with my date, to order something delicious and to have a good time. 

My date started in a good way. I was in front of that young man, he saw me and immediately he stood up, he gave me an innocent small kiss in my cheek. He was wearing a black t-shirt and jeans, he smelt delicious because he was using a fresh expensive perfume, in a few words, he looked very handsome. He took my hand and we sat down on the chairs. After talking for a few minutes I ordered a hot soup, a spicy piece of chicken and a bitter icy limonade, all my food was  wonderful and extremely delicious. We were talking for  a lot of time, I felt  very happy and  comfortable to be there and to be with him. The atmosphere was warm, calm and lovely, I could breathe  peacefully and I felt relaxation streaming my veins. We were talking but suddenly  he gave me a bunch of sweet smelling red roses and with a romantic and adorable voice he told me: would you like to be my girlfriend?. In that moment, I felt  buterflies flying in my stomach, I was very surprised, and I felt  that everybody was watching us. After a few minutes with  a hesitant nervous voice I answered: " yes, I want it", and  immediately he gave me a warm big huge.

As a conclusion, it is possible to describe every detail  of a moment or situation, in special if it is an important event in our lives. Most of the time when we describe something we can transmit the  feelings that we had in that  moment and we can make that  the person who is reading our  essay can imagine everything as the same way that we lived it.  


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